When it Rains it Pours

Here is the semi-final version of my thinking character assignment and first attempt at 3d character animation. I really feel like i'm getting the hang of both character animation and using maya. However, now that I have those somewhat figured it out I think I need to readress overall appeal by adding visual interest in as many ways as possible to really give it that punch. I wanted it to look natural so I actually toned down the poses quite a bit but just to maybe change the camera angle or add in some cuts. Also, I wanted to have more subtlety in eye movement.